4.7 Count Modifiers, Redundancy, and Idioms
Key Takeaways
Use count and non-count modifiers according to the noun’s meaning.
Remove repetition that adds no useful distinction in the given context.
Learn established idioms while recognizing accepted variants.
A concise revision must preserve meaning and grammatical correctness.
4.7 Count Modifiers, Redundancy, and Idioms
Count modifiers, redundant phrases, and idiomatic prepositions affect precise expression. Use context to revise wording without changing the intended claim.
2. Countable vs. Uncountable Modifiers
In English syntax, nouns are divided into countable (count) nouns and uncountable (mass or non-count) nouns. Modifiers quantifying these nouns must match their grammatical category. Mixing count and non-count modifiers is a staple error type on the Praxis Core Writing test.
The Countable Category (Discrete Items)
Count nouns refer to individual, separate entities that can be tallied with cardinal numbers (e.g., one essay, three teachers, forty students, fifteen textbooks). Modifiers governing count nouns include:
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Fewer (NOT less)
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Number of (NOT amount of)
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Many (NOT much)
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Fewer... than
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Correct: The school reported fewer behavioral infractions this semester than last year.
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Correct: A substantial number of candidates passed the certification assessment on their first attempt.
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Correct: How many lesson plans did the mentor review?
The Uncountable Category (Mass Quantities & Abstractions)
Non-count nouns refer to undifferentiated masses, materials, bulk substances, or abstract concepts that cannot be counted individually without a unit of measurement (e.g., homework, water, evidence, information, funding, research, enthusiasm, stress). Modifiers governing non-count nouns include:
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Less (NOT fewer)
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Amount of (NOT number of)
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Much (NOT many)
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Little / Less... than
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Correct: The intervention resulted in less anxiety among elementary students during testing week.
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Correct: The department requested a modest amount of supplemental funding for lab supplies.
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Correct: The researcher did not find much empirical evidence supporting the instructional hypothesis.
The Special Exceptions: Time, Money, & Distance
When expressions of time, money, measurement, or distance represent a single total sum or continuous quantity rather than individual discrete units, standard written English pairs them with less rather than fewer:
- The candidate finished the essay in less than twenty minutes. (20 minutes treated as a continuous span of time).
- The textbook costs less than $50. ($50 treated as an aggregate sum of money).
- The school is less than five miles from the district headquarters. (5 miles treated as a total linear distance).
| Modifier Category | Count Nouns (Discrete Units) | Non-Count Nouns (Mass / Abstraction) | Common Error Trap |
|---|---|---|---|
| Comparative Quantity | Fewer (fewer classrooms, fewer books) | Less (less noise, less friction) | "There were less students absent today." → Incorrect (fewer students) |
| Aggregate Quantity | Number (number of applicants) | Amount (amount of paperwork) | "The amount of teachers attending the meeting..." → Incorrect (number of teachers) |
| Degree / Volume | Many (many questions) | Much (much encouragement) | "The teacher did not have many time left." → Incorrect (much time) |
3. Redundancies and Tautologies (Economy of Expression)
ETS selected-response questions frequently test a candidate's ability to spot needless repetition. A phrasing may be grammatically permissible in conversational speech, yet defective in formal academic prose because it combines words with redundant semantic definitions.
The "Reason Is Because" Trap
The word reason inherently denotes causation, as does the conjunction because. The combination can be wordy; a direct because-clause is often clearer. In standard written English, use either the reason... is that or rephrase with because:
- Incorrect: The reason the school was evacuated is because the fire alarm malfunctioned.
- Correct: The reason the school was evacuated is that the fire alarm malfunctioned.
- Correct: The school was evacuated because the fire alarm malfunctioned.
High-Frequency Redundant Expressions to Eliminate
| Redundant Phrase | Why It Is Redundant | Correct Concise Alternative |
|---|---|---|
| advance forward | Advance means to move forward; forward is superfluous. | advance |
| revert back / refer back | The prefix re- signifies back; back is duplicative. | revert / refer |
| collaborate together | Collaborate means to work together with others. | collaborate |
| past history / past memories | History and memories can only exist in the past. | history / memories |
| end result | A result by definition occurs at the end of a process. | result |
| basic fundamentals | Fundamentals are by definition foundational and basic. | fundamentals |
| unexpected surprise | A surprise is inherently unexpected. | surprise |
| completely unanimous | Unanimous means with complete agreement of all parties; degrees cannot exist. | unanimous |
| two equal halves | Halves are mathematically divided into two equal parts. | two halves or equal parts |
| brief in duration | Brief already refers to temporal duration. | brief |
| sum total | A sum is the mathematical total. | sum or total |
4. Fixed Prepositional Idioms
In standard written English, idioms are conventional collocations—fixed combinations of verbs, adjectives, or nouns with specific prepositions. Because prepositional idioms rarely follow universal logical deductions, candidates must memorize standard academic pairings. The Praxis Core regularly substitutes incorrect colloquial prepositions in Error Identification and Sentence Correction questions.
Different From and Accepted Variants
Different from is a safe, widely used choice when comparing noun phrases. Different than is also established in American English, particularly before a clause. Do not identify a usage error solely because than appears. Check whether the comparison itself is logical: compare the philosophy of one school with that of another school, rather than with the school itself.
Essential Prepositional Idioms for the Praxis
| Idiom | Nonstandard Colloquial Trap | Correct Standard Context Example |
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| Capable of | capable to | The student teacher is capable of managing diverse classroom behaviors. |
| Comply with | comply to / comply in | All public school districts must comply with state safety mandates. |
| Conform to | conform in these requirements | The newly drafted lesson plans conform to state curriculum frameworks. |
| Insist on | insist to / insist for | The clinical supervisor insists on prompt submission of clinical logs. |
| Prohibit from | prohibit to | School district regulations prohibit staff from accepting personal gifts. |
| Regard as | regard to be / regard like | Faculty members regard Dr. Simmons as an inspiring mentor. |
| Consider [No Preposition] | consider of a success | The committee considers the pilot program a comprehensive success. |
| Subscribe to | subscribe for / subscribe with | Most educational researchers subscribe to peer-reviewed journals. |
| Consistent with | consistent to / consistent in | The instructional approach is fully consistent with cognitive learning theory. |
| Opposed to | opposed against | Several school board members were vehemently opposed to the proposed budget cut. |
| Attribute to | attribute with / attribute as | The principal attributed the rising test scores to dedicated after-school tutoring. |
| Equivalent to | equivalent with | Completing the online module is equivalent to three hours of professional development. |
| In accordance with | in accordance to | Grades were calculated in accordance with the approved department syllabus. |
| Preoccupied with | preoccupied in organizing | The educator was preoccupied with organizing the regional science olympiad. |
Which of the following sentences correctly utilizes count versus non-count modifiers in accordance with standard written English?
Because the school experienced fewer classroom behavioral disruptions this quarter, the guidance counselors spent a smaller amount of time processing disciplinary referrals.
Because the school experienced less classroom behavioral disruptions this quarter, the guidance counselors spent a smaller amount of time processing disciplinary referrals.
Because the school experienced fewer classroom behavioral disruptions this quarter, the guidance counselors spent a smaller number of time processing disciplinary referrals.
Because the school experienced less classroom behavioral disruptions this quarter, the guidance counselors spent a smaller number of time processing disciplinary referrals.
Identify the sentence that eliminates redundant phrasings and expresses ideas with standard academic conciseness.
The reason the curriculum committee decided to postpone the vote is because members wanted to refer back to previous historical precedents.
The curriculum committee postponed the vote because members wanted to consult precedents.
The reason why the curriculum committee postponed the vote was due to the fact that members wanted to revert back to past history.
The curriculum committee decided to advance forward with postponing the vote because the end result was not completely unanimous.
Which of the following sentences correctly applies standard prepositional idioms?
The special education teacher is fully capable to implement individualized instruction that is consistent to state standards.
The special education teacher is fully capable in implementing individualized instruction that is consistent with state standards.
The special education teacher is fully capable of implementing individualized instruction that is consistent with state standards.
The special education teacher is fully capable of implementing individualized instruction that is consistent to state standards.
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