12.3 Describing People, Places and Events; Simple Narration
Key Takeaways
- Use description frames for people (looks, personality, clothes), places (there is/are, location, adjectives), and events (what / where / when / who / how people feel).
- Speaking photo or prompt talk works with a fixed order: place → people → actions → feelings → simple opinion.
- Writing Part 7 needs simple narration: past simple events, sequence words (First, Then, Next, Finally), and optional short feelings or dialogue.
- Link feelings to reasons (She was happy because…) to raise Language and Content quality in Speaking and Writing.
- Avoid empty adjectives alone (nice, good) without detail, and avoid tense chaos when telling a story.
12.3 Describing People, Places and Events; Simple Narration
Quick Answer: Describe with clear order (place → people → actions → feelings). Use there is/are, look like / is wearing, and present continuous for picture talk; use past simple + sequence words for Writing Part 7 stories. Always add a reason for feelings when you can (happy because…).
Functional language is not only inviting and agreeing. You also need language to paint a simple picture in words and to tell what happened. Cambridge A2 Key asks for this in:
- Speaking Parts 1–2 when you talk about home, people, free-time places, or visual prompts
- Writing Part 6 when you describe a plan, place, or person briefly
- Writing Part 7 when you narrate a three-picture story (35+ words)
This section gives description frames, narration tools, feeling language, mini models, and traps. Pair it with your earlier work on narrative connectors and with opinion language from 12.2 so descriptions do not stop at It's nice.
What “describe” means at A2
At CEFR A2, a good description is organised, concrete, and accurate enough to be understood. You are not writing a novel. You are selecting 5–8 clear facts with simple grammar.
| Target | Typical tools |
|---|---|
| People | age band, hair, clothes, personality, job/school role |
| Places | type of place, location, there is/are, adjectives, what you can do |
| Events | what happened, who, where, when, result, feelings |
| Photos / prompts | what you can see now (often present continuous) |
| Stories | past sequence with connectors |
Describing people
Phrase bank: appearance and identity
| Area | Frames | Examples |
|---|---|---|
| Basic ID | This is… / She's a… | This is my sister. She's a student. |
| Age (careful, approximate) | about … years old | He's about fifteen years old. |
| Hair | has + adjective + hair | She has long dark hair. |
| Height/build (simple) | tall / short / slim | He's tall and slim. |
| Clothes (picture talk) | is wearing… | She's wearing a red jacket and jeans. |
| Looks like | looks + adjective | He looks tired / happy / young. |
| Personality | is + adjective | She's friendly and funny. |
| Ability | can + verb | He can play the guitar. |
Useful adjectives (people)
Appearance/clothes colours: tall, short, long, dark, fair, curly, straight, red, blue, black, white
Personality: kind, friendly, funny, quiet, noisy, hard-working, shy, helpful
Mini model: person description (Speaking Part 1)
Interlocutor: Tell me about your best friend.
Candidate: My best friend is called Nora. She's sixteen. She has short brown hair and she's wearing glasses at school. She's very kind and funny. We met in Year 8, and we both like music.
Structure used: name → age → appearance → personality → shared detail. That is enough for A2 extension.
Writing touch (Part 6)
- My cousin Leo is coming too. He's tall and really friendly.
- I'm bringing my friend Maya. She loves football.
Describing places
Phrase bank: places
| Area | Frames | Examples |
|---|---|---|
| Type | It's a… | It's a small café near the station. |
| Location | in / near / next to / opposite | It's next to the library. |
| Existence | There is / There are | There are many trees in the park. |
| Parts | It has… | It has a big kitchen and two bedrooms. |
| Atmosphere | It's quiet / busy / modern / old | It's quiet in the morning. |
| Activities | You can + verb | You can swim and buy ice cream there. |
| Opinion | I like it because… | I like it because it's close to my school. |
Mini model: place (Speaking)
My favourite place in town is the riverside park. It's near my house, and there are bikes and a small café. At the weekend it's busy, but in the evening it's quiet. You can walk, take photos, and meet friends. I like it because the air feels fresh.
Empty vs rich place language
| Empty | Richer A2 |
|---|---|
| The park is nice. | The park is green and quiet. There is a lake, and you can hire a boat. |
| My room is good. | My room is small but bright. It has a desk next to the window. |
| The city is big. | The city is big and busy. There are many buses, and the centre has a huge market. |
Train yourself to replace nice/good/big with one concrete detail every time.
Describing events and occasions
Events include parties, school trips, matches, festivals, and simple accidents in stories.
Event frame: 5W + feeling
- What was it?
- Where was it?
- When was it?
- Who was there?
- What happened (2–3 actions)?
- How did people feel and why?
Mini model: event (Speaking Part 1 style)
Interlocutor: Tell me about a good day you had.
Candidate: Last Saturday I went to my cousin's birthday party at his house. There were about ten people. We ate pizza and listened to music. I was happy because I saw friends I don't meet every week.
Phrase bank: event verbs (present for habits / past for stories)
meet, arrive, start, play, watch, eat, drink, take photos, give a present, win, lose, leave, go home
Photo / visual prompt talk (Speaking Part 2 support)
Part 2 materials often include pictures or options you must discuss. Even when the task is “choose,” you still describe to compare.
Fixed order for a picture (about 30–40 seconds)
- Place / setting: This photo shows a kitchen / a beach / a classroom.
- People: There are two girls and a man.
- Actions (present continuous): They are cooking / running / talking.
- Details: clothes, weather, objects (There is a big table…).
- Feelings / guess: They look happy. Maybe it's a family lunch.
- Simple opinion / link to task: I think this is a good idea for a weekend because…
Present continuous for “now in the picture”
| See | Say |
|---|---|
| Action in progress | She is reading a book. |
| Two actions | He is cooking and she is washing plates. |
| Negative | They aren't working. They're playing a game. |
Do not force past tense for a static photo description unless you are inventing a story about what happened before—default is present continuous + there is/are.
Mini dialogue: describing then choosing (Part 2)
A: In this picture there is a busy market. People are buying fruit.
B: Yes, and they're wearing summer clothes. It looks hot.
A: I think the market is fun, but it might be crowded.
B: I prefer the quiet park picture because we can have a picnic.
A: OK, let's choose the park.
Description feeds opinion; opinion feeds decision—full functional chain.
Simple narration for Writing Part 7
Part 7 asks for a story based on three pictures, usually 35 words or more. Narration is the function of telling events in order.
Core narrative toolkit
| Tool | Examples |
|---|---|
| Past simple | walked, saw, bought, fell, helped, went, said |
| Sequence words | First, Then, Next, After that, Suddenly, Finally |
| Time phrases | yesterday, last Saturday, in the morning, at 5 o'clock |
| And / but / because / so | She ran for the bus but it left, so she was late. |
| Short dialogue (optional) | “Are you OK?” he asked. |
| Feeling + reason | Mia was worried because she lost her bag. |
Three-picture skeleton (always useful)
- Picture 1 — start: who + where + first action
- Picture 2 — problem or middle action: what goes wrong / changes
- Picture 3 — end: solution + feeling
Model story (original, exam-length)
First, Tom waited at the bus stop in the rain. Then a car stopped, and his uncle smiled. “Would you like a lift?” he asked. Tom got in and said thank you. Finally, they arrived at school on time, and Tom was happy because he didn't miss his exam.
Notice functions inside narration: invitation/offer in dialogue, feeling + reason at the end, clear sequence.
Another model with a small accident
Yesterday Sara walked to the park with her dog. Suddenly the dog ran after a ball and Sara fell. A boy said, “Are you OK? Can I help you?” He helped her stand up. After that, they played with the dog together, and Sara felt better.
Requests/offers from 12.1 appear naturally in stories—good cross-skill recycling.
Feelings and reasons (high-value A2 upgrade)
Examiners see many scripts that only list actions. Feelings make descriptions and stories human and complete.
Phrase bank: feelings
| Feeling | Sentence frames |
|---|---|
| Happy | She was happy because… / They look happy. |
| Sad | He felt sad when… |
| Tired | I was tired after… |
| Worried / nervous | Mia was worried because she lost her phone. |
| Angry | He was angry because the train was late. (keep mild) |
| Surprised | They were surprised when they saw the gift. |
| Excited | I was excited about the trip. |
| Bored | He looked bored in the long meeting. |
Rule: feeling + because / when / after
- She was excited because it was her birthday.
- He was tired after the long match.
- They were surprised when the lights went off.
In Speaking, feelings also support Interactive Communication: I think they look worried. What do you think?
Linking description to Writing Part 6
Part 6 is not a full story, but light description helps content points:
| Content need | Descriptive line |
|---|---|
| Invite to a place | Would you like to come to the new café opposite the cinema? It's small and quiet. |
| Suggest clothes/weather | It's going to be cold, so wear a warm jacket. |
| Describe who is coming | My brother is coming too. He's funny and he can play the guitar. |
| Explain preference | I prefer the earlier train because it's less crowded. |
Full sentences + one concrete detail beat telegraphic notes.
Common mistakes in description and narration
| Mistake | Example | Fix |
|---|---|---|
| Only nice/good | The man is nice. The place is good. | Add hair/clothes/objects/actions |
| Tense chaos in stories | She go to park and sees a dog and ran | Stay in past simple for Part 7 events |
| No order | random details | Use First / Then / Finally or place→people→actions |
| Missing people in photo talk | only objects | Name who is there |
| Invented complex plot | 120 words of drama for Part 7 | Keep 35–70 clear words |
| Feeling without reason | He was sad. | He was sad because he lost his ticket. |
| Copying memorised story that ignores pictures | wrong actions | Match each picture |
| Overusing there is without actions | static list | Add is wearing / is playing / looked |
| Register clash | slang in a careful story | Keep standard school English |
Grammar checklist for this section
| Structure | Best use |
|---|---|
| Present simple | habits; general truths about places/people |
| Present continuous | picture actions happening “now” |
| Past simple | Part 7 narration; past events in Speaking |
| there is/are | place and photo description |
| have got / has | appearance and possessions |
| can | abilities and place activities |
| Comparatives | The park is quieter than the market. |
| because / so / but / and | reasons and contrast |
| Sequence adverbs | story organisation |
You do not need past perfect or long passive forms for A2 Key success.
Integrated practice: one prompt, three products
Prompt pictures in your mind: (1) girl at station, (2) she drops her ticket, (3) a guard helps her.
- Speaking description (present): In the first picture a girl is standing at the station. She is wearing a blue coat. She looks nervous.
- Part 2 opinion: I think stations are stressful because they are busy. I'd rather take a bus.
- Part 7 narration (past): First, Lily waited at the station. Then she dropped her ticket under a seat. Finally, a guard helped her, and she was relieved because she could still travel.
Same situation, three functional modes: describe, opine, narrate.
Timed drills
Drill A — People (3 minutes)
Describe three people you know with name + two appearance details + one personality adjective + one activity.
Drill B — Places (3 minutes)
Describe your school or street using there is/are four times and you can twice.
Drill C — Photo order (3 minutes)
Any magazine photo: say place → people → actions → feeling → opinion in 40 seconds.
Drill D — Part 7 speed story (4 minutes)
Invent three linked sentences with First / Then / Finally and one because feeling. Count words (aim 40+).
Register notes for description and stories
- Speaking photo talk: natural, present, interactive (What can you see?).
- Part 7 story: standard narrative English; light dialogue is fine; avoid chat abbreviations (u, thx, LOL).
- Part 6 email description: friendly full sentences.
- Do not switch into poetic language (the azure firmament wept)—keep A2 clarity.
How this chapter fits the productive papers
| Need | Use from Ch.12 |
|---|---|
| Ask, invite, offer, suggest | 12.1 |
| Agree, soft disagree, prefer | 12.2 |
| Describe people/places; tell a story; say feelings | 12.3 |
In a single Speaking Part 2 minute you might describe two options, say which you prefer, softly disagree, and suggest a final choice. In one Writing week you might invite in Part 6 and narrate in Part 7. Functional language is the glue between vocabulary topics and exam tasks.
Final checklist
- Can I describe a person without stopping at nice?
- Can I use there is/are and is wearing for a photo?
- Can I tell a three-step past story with First / Then / Finally?
- Can I add happy/worried/tired because…?
- Do my descriptions support a simple opinion when the task needs a choice?
If you can do these things, you can handle the descriptive and narrative demands of A2 Key Speaking and Writing with clear, polite, organised English—exactly the CEFR A2 standard Cambridge is looking for.
What is the best default tense for describing actions you can see in a Speaking photo prompt?
Which sentence best upgrades an empty place description?
Which line best fits Writing Part 7 simple narration?
Why should you add because after a feeling word in descriptions and stories?